Thesis

Thesis:

Buddha’s belief “All that we are is a result of what we have thought” is that people’s thoughts or  process of thinking can shape your life.

E002 Bourdain Essay 3 Q's

Question 1 Answer"

Haiti's art embodies skateboarding norms in many similar ways. An example is a high percentage of artists in Haiti will never make money from their work. As skateboarders, a high percentage of us will not make money or benefit from out work. This must have a connection with both cultures passion for the passion not  for money. Haiti is low on resources and skateboards don't have money but we still manage to for fill our passions.

Question 2 Answer:

The governmental structure of Haiti is corrupted and not pushing for growth and development of the island. Where as skateboarding culture has no structure, not one leading or ruling, but manages to evolve in both the level of quality and community wise.An example is Haitians vote, but the leader or president is ultimately predetermined regardless of the votes. Soon after said leaders usually flee the island and never return while they promised for change. Where as skateboards have no leaders or structure, but the community is what pushes the culture not some gold digging ass wipes making false promises. Both cultures have sparse resources, some more than others, but each is moving towards different directions that differ from each other. Its sad that Haiti doesn't have a leader willing to make change for the greater good. But that's what separates our culture. How we want to change.

E002 Essay 3 conclusion

Overall these key points to learn will help you fit in or assimilate into skateboard culture. Aside from all the things you need to thrive or fit in skate culture, it may not be for everyone one. Skateboarding requires a tremendous amount of will power and a body ready to take falls. Maybe you are not into tricks but riding around in that case you wont fall "as much", but there is always a chance of a fall in this lifestyle. All the same it is still your choice to enter or not, but if you do make sure to learn the keys. Language/Etiquette, Mind set and how to associate with skaters and police/security.

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The Ollie is the staple to other skateboarding tricks because modern skateboarding requires you to lift off the ground to achieve a maneuver or "trick".


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The Ollie is the staple to other skateboarding tricks , for modern skateboarding requires you to lift off the ground to achieve a maneuver or "trick".

comma and a coordinating conjunction rule.

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1 Coordinating Conj.

 

 

Og has mad made his name selling millions of books to help people make millions, but it took a lot of work to get up to that point of success.

 

 

2. Intro Phase: I did not have one. Here is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

 

I was ready to Ollie because I remembered, PSPL.

 

 

3. Use with coordinate adj: I did not have one. Here is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

A kick flip is a flick of the board, A flick followed after a Ollie.

 

4. Adjective Clause: I Did not have one. Here is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

The Ollie, with its many parts in just one motion, is difficult.

 

5. Appositive: I did not have one. Here Is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

Og’s famous quote, The Harvest Quote, was a very impressionable.

 

6: Parenthetical Expression: I did not have one. Here is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

The Ollie, as far as skateboarding  goes, Is the foundation to skateboarding.

 

7. Absolute Phrases: I did not have one. Here is a created one from my essay ideals.

 

Rodney Mullen made history in skateboarding after inventing many tricks and the Ollie, his tricks have then on have been a great influence to skateboarding.

 

8 .Words expressing contrast:

 

Unlike Galphan, Rodney’s Ollie was flat ground.

 

9. Direct address

 

The great salesman Og Mandino once said, “Always do your best. What you do know, you will plant latter.”

 

 

 Og Mandino a famous salesman once said "Always do your best. What you plant now, you will harvest later". This relates so much to skateboarding.The Ollie is the foundation to every single trick  in skateboarding. You always do your best so you don't get injured and mastering the basic Ollie will allow you to pick up every trick later on. The Ollie is the plant and once you plant it, you will harvest the vast world that opens up after it.

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